Changes between Version 16 and Version 17 of WikiStart

Timestamp:

09/20/10 09:37:56 (3 years ago)

Author:

Lantash

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WikiStart

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-'''Please note: This application isn't actively developed anymore.'''
+'''Please note that this application isn't actively developed anymore.'''
 
-An Open Source Ajax application that allows school classes to manage their homework in a central place, lets the students have discussions and share their photos in a easy-to-use online gallery.
+An Open source, Ajax-based web service, allowing students to collaboratively manage and discuss their homework and share documents and photos.
 
 == November 5, 2007: Klassenbuch 2.8 released ==
 
-After about two months of constant development I'm proud to announce the release of the new Klassenbuch version 2.8. This release doesn't introduce a bunch of new features. Most of the improvements were made behind the scenes, invisible to the user. Overall, the speed has been increased noticeable, thanks to both code changes on the server side and on the client side.
+After about two months of constant development, I'm proud to announce the release of the new Klassenbuch version 2.8. This release doesn't introduce many new features. Most of the improvements were made behind the scenes, invisible to the user. Overall, the speed has been increased noticeable, thanks to both code changes on the server side and in the client side.
 
 === New Features ===
-Each window can be closed using the esc key and the arrow keys enable a quick navigation through the photo gallery.
+Each window can be closed using the ESC key and the arrow keys allow a quick navigation through the photo gallery.
 
 When downloading a whole photo album, a tiny progress window reminds the user to be patient while the server is busy generating the archive. Besides, the server-side archive generation mechanism is a little more intelligent by only generating an archive if really necessary.